Comments : We're losing you.

  • 16 years ago

    by keithnwv

    Before i read this poem, i was going to ask what inspired you to write the others, but i think i can understand this one. and maybe now i know about the others. no words i can say will help but i am here if needed.

    keith

  • 16 years ago

    by Derf K

    Kate, There is such sadness here expressed but shining through is also a strength and a resolve that only true love can give.
    P.S. Try using 'Losing' in the title, that might work better.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kate Hicks

    I'm always making these mistakes. I'm Dysllexic and can't spell for the life of me.

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Aww, am sorry about your mom i know how much she means to you since i love my mom too much

    she is always alive in your heart and that what matters

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    The blood of a poets broken heart shows up well on the white page with words that show the cracks and depths of that wounded heart. Keep up the good works.