I'd apreciate feedback on this poem, help, and just people to talk to.

Thanks for your comment :)
you did a great job on this
its really sad poem i hope it didn't really happen!
but the way you described it was very real
keep up the good work :)

Wow this was little way too close to home. I'm here to talk if u want too. I know how it feels to walk past someone in the supermarket and need to go be sick because of how they smelled. or how it feels to look in the mirror and remember that they think u look good in a dress or that they'd be pleased with what they see.

....this one knocked the breath out of me... thats amazing. weather its a person experience or not, wen a poet's able to bring out those emotions and slam them into one single poem, you know u've got something 2 work with and u definately do have something to work with. TONS of emtion.

it was great!
keep it ^^!

-Katelyn-

Wow killer poem lots of emotion your work is a joy to read