Pressure, The Puppeteer

by Indian Comma Bean   Feb 4, 2008


Hello my friends,
This here's the puppeteer,
He'll be controlling your actions
from behind with a mirror!

He'll be throwing your voice,
He'll be starting the fights,
Don't look around, you'll have no choice,
Think fast, you're in the lights.

There's no strings attached
but you'll find you cannot move,
He won't wait around till' you're evenly matched,
He won't even ask if you've something to prove.

You'll want to cry out,
You'll probably burst into tears,
You'll be outraged, there's no doubt,
But he'll slyly wink and whisper, "Cheers."

So you'll have to be strong,
You'll have to ignore his advances,
For you'll find you've had this power all along,
You've just simply taken all the wrong chances

I'm back P&Q

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Very refreshing piece, I like it, it posses some impressing randomness and I truly enjoyed in it.
    Originality of this piece is great and I love the way you wrote it, it is somehow different and very free.
    Bravo, good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Interesting poem, very refreshing and unique. I like the topic and the way you wrote it is quite excellent. The imagery that you created is very vivid. Truly deep poem, filled with effective lines.
    Greatly done!
    P.s- Welcome back :)

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