Interesting poem, very refreshing and unique. I like the topic and the way you wrote it is quite excellent. The imagery that you created is very vivid. Truly deep poem, filled with effective lines.
Greatly done!
P.s- Welcome back :)

Very refreshing piece, I like it, it posses some impressing randomness and I truly enjoyed in it.
Originality of this piece is great and I love the way you wrote it, it is somehow different and very free.
Bravo, good job.