I found this poem to be interesting, but some of the phrasing was awkward. Making this poem rhyme was definitely a good idea, but some of the rhymes seemed forced, and in the end I'm not sure what the message was. I suppose the mirror was supposed to be your life? Or was it that you were trying to commit suicide? Did your reflection die instead of you? Hmm, I think I'm getting progressively worse and worse at interpreting poems...

again another winner I hope you are not really feeling like this,
Cathy