Pedals fall off my last red rose,
just as friendships die, and sadness grows.
My life slowly turning to confusion,
and I just stand back and watch this illusion.
Tears fall down my red, blushed, face,
and the heart on my paper I trace and trace.
Over and over again, his voice in my head,
and over and over again I wish I was dead.
Missing his touch, his warmth, his feel,
wishing none of this happened, and my heart could heal.
My dying rose has wilted now,
yet my unwilted love has kept to it's vow.
Time goes bye as memories fade,
more people are hurt, broken hearts made.
Worlds collide and and turn upside down,
but to heal the pain I spin round and round.
Dizziness hides what I want to be,
but I don't think I can ever be free.
Darkness falls on my last red rose,
as my happiness goes somewhere nobody knows.
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I am deeply thankfull to you that you have rated and made comments on my poem in the near past.
I have submitted my peom "Child Beggar Noshi",That i wrote when i was a Student of Civil Engineer,this is a real story of a Young Girl,and when i meet her,i was deeply grieved to see her condition.Kindly read my poem "Child Begger Noshi" and rate and Comment on it,to let me know,did it touched your heart or not
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I am deeply touched to read your feelings in the words of this poem....Good work.
Please, read my poem "WHEN SOME ONE LEAVES FOR EVER" and rate it...You can rate it as you like,It will matter alot to me.
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