I really like the basic concept.
I get how you feel.
It's like all the excitement, wonder, and butterflies have all disappeared...

I love it good work thanks for commenting me 5/5

Love this poem! great poem hunni.. 5/5 keep it up.. thanx for commentin mine.
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Holy god in heaven....I KNOW HOW U FEEL. that whole thing about cleaaring ur mind(i suk at quoting 2 :] ) in swim practice yesterday i forgot to breath cause of all the things goin thro me. wow amazing poem. 5/5