Gentle Breathing

by Indian Comma Bean   Feb 5, 2008


Gentle breathing,
Heart proceeding,
Sinful meeting
of tongues, greeting.

Hands roaming,
Fingers combing,
Lips rolling,
Eyes patrolling.

He kissed her softly,
He hugged her tight,
He grinned and she laughed,
For he wouldn't be losing her-

Oh no, not tonight.

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  • 14 years ago

    by victoria

    Haha such a lovely and vivid poem. I enjoyed this one of yours.=]

    victoria

  • 16 years ago

    by Paiger

    Sweet, I love how you could describe such emotion with so few words, very well writen, Beautiful :)

  • 16 years ago

    by silent turbulence

    I love itt!!!! 5/5!! very very nice!

  • 16 years ago

    by JulieAnne

    Nice.
    Intresting
    A different approch

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  • 16 years ago

    by Its a love story

    I really do love this poem! i give it a 5/5 all of the way! keep up the awesome work!

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