Tulips and Roses

by Indian Comma Bean   Feb 5, 2008


Vines exploring,
My eyes adoring,
Crawling like ivy,
Ivy upon ancient household.

Oaken towers bestowing life
upon the new sprouts they hold,
Soaking up crystalline dew,
Hoping this year to start a new.

Blue jays and Robins,
Chirping to the forest,
Fluttering majestic wings,
Singing oh so pleasantly.

Tulips and roses,
Magnolias and Poppies,
All dancing in the sunlight,
As bees harvest liquid gold.

Clouds rolling,
Casting shadows upon the ground,
Gentle breeze blows my hair aside,
All this beauty, If we had only tried...

Please suggest a new title, it would be appreciated.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, I loved your choice of words and the flow of this poem. Excellent write. The structure was good. Keep up the great work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Hm, A New title? How About A Garden's Treasure? It's the first thing that popped into mind. I felt the images Turn and mix into the pictures of the flowers and I felt a sense of serenity. ^^ I Love reading your work! I absolutely ADORE it. Pleas eKeep writing you're very Talented. ^-^

    With Much Love,
    -Ally

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Very imaginative =]
    Great flow 2 ^^

    Thanx for the message

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    I have to say that I really like your poem. I think that the nature section of this site has to be where one can find really wonderfully written poems. They aren’t old and dull like so may other “love poems” I’m sure even mine fall into that category once in awhile. Keep up the good words and may all your writings bring you peace.

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