by Tom Swart
I have to say that I really like your poem. I think that the nature section of this site has to be where one can find really wonderfully written poems. They aren’t old and dull like so may other “love poems†I’m sure even mine fall into that category once in awhile. Keep up the good words and may all your writings bring you peace. |
by Nobodys Hero
Very imaginative =] |
Hm, A New title? How About A Garden's Treasure? It's the first thing that popped into mind. I felt the images Turn and mix into the pictures of the flowers and I felt a sense of serenity. ^^ I Love reading your work! I absolutely ADORE it. Pleas eKeep writing you're very Talented. ^-^ |
Wow, I loved your choice of words and the flow of this poem. Excellent write. The structure was good. Keep up the great work. |