Comments : Heaven with my friends

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Ben
    What a wonderful piece you have penned. Prayers we all pray.

    I pray for loved ones salvation so I may see their smiles again
    The only thing better than Heaven, is Heaven with my friends.

    That is what I hope...that I will be able to spend eternity with all those I love.
    ~Bravo~
    Love Mom

  • 16 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    Nice work
    its beautiful
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    Streams of anguished tears flow from my weary eyes.
    Just like falling rain, pouring from the midnight skies.
    ^^^
    This couplet shows such pain.

    I pray for my babies safety, as they grow so strong.
    Although I know in my heart the Lord won't tarry long.
    ^^^
    The safety of our children is what our hearts breath for. And to even think of someone or something hurting them tears at us.

    I pray for my fractured family who now seems so far away.
    Hoping Jesus will erase our Devil, so we may reunite someday.
    ^^^
    Reunite you shall hun ....

    I pray for our dying society, as we fall further away from God.
    For a country founded on Christianity, doesn't that seem odd.
    ^^^
    You have spoken such truth here .... we remember to eat, drink, walk and talk but how many times do we thank God for granting us those things.

    I pray for loved ones salvation so I may see their smiles again
    The only thing better than Heaven, is Heaven with my friends.
    ^^^
    I love this couplet .... ~wipes tears~

    God Bless hun
    Luanne

  • 16 years ago

    by Zara Baines

    Great ending