A very beautiful love poem , you have penned so nicely. I like the theme and flow of words.well done.
Good to see you posting again after this long.

Very beautiful yet filled with heartfelt sadness at the same time. I like the imagery that you created and whole atmosphere of this piece. You did great job with rhymes, too and created excellent flow from the first to the last line.
Keep up!

Your poem is very beautiful and thoughtful.. :)

Yes, love has a strong effect to way see our lives..

This was really good! excellent job!

Using a rhyming scheme like this can be a challenge. I see that this is not your case.
I also, like the way you have described a past love, such lovely discription, especially in the 2nd stanza.

Today i in moring i was thinking the same thing. when i was with my love i was in dream land, our sorrow, happiness, and lost of thing, love life is land of dream, but practical life is totally different.
nice poem

Wow! so beautifully written,,,,really loved it yar...5/5

luv

I luff the poem I think is really well done and words are well used. I like the way the use the rhymes and the flow of the words.Also I like the way that I understand every little line of the poem and is not a "dictionary" poem. Also I luff this line Heart knows no fear, love is so grand. Keep writing

Sourav , Excellent poem ! ..wow
5/5
BIYA

Hey dude!beautiful poem....true...but still...even practical love can be successful....anyways this is exactly how one would feel wen Cupid's arrow strikes...u've penned love in simple words...keep up the good work!
Pooja

Beautiful just beautiful

I really like your poems.
your a great poet!
:)

I love it. It is a great poem. It summarizes so much. I can relate ♥...
An amazing piece of work
:)
Kitty