Comments : Betrayal

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Please write me a comment...

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Aw...im sorry babe no one should be treated that way
    great poem though! 5/5<33

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Life can be hard and soft at the same time. Its too bad we have to suffer the pain of a broken heart but like the saying goes , what doesn't kill you makes you stronger, I'm sure that this pain will pass. nice write and good emotion, peace

  • 16 years ago

    by Heba

    It was so touching and so nice. i like it

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew

    This is a touching piece potray in very nice words. I like the poem, great work full of emotions.