She's crying,
She's breaking,
She's lying,
She's faking,
She's hated
And taunted
She's wanted
And flaunted
She's a puppet
On a string,
She's an angel
Without a wing,
She's the devil
In disguise
Blow her a kiss
Say your last goodbyes
Very good write =]
I think that the fact that you kept it simple, yet you expressed yourself was wonderful. The usage of vocabulary and the voice behind it was niice also...but what I liked most about it was the fact that the flow was easy and not scrambled all over the place like most.
Overall perfectly and beautifully written
5/5