Comments : She's a Puppet

  • 16 years ago

    by KJ

    Very good write =]
    I think that the fact that you kept it simple, yet you expressed yourself was wonderful. The usage of vocabulary and the voice behind it was niice also...but what I liked most about it was the fact that the flow was easy and not scrambled all over the place like most.
    Overall perfectly and beautifully written
    5/5

    xxPaSsIoNaTe kIsSeSxx