Hey.
This was very well written.
I really liked the 4th and 5th stanzas.
Keep up the awesome work.
Take Care.

Oh.
This one is very well written indeed. The Use of Language was very new to me. Some words i never even heard of but i believe I caught the meaning just by your Poem. ^^

I really liked it.
Keep up the work. I hope to read more.
<3
5/5

-Ally