I liked it.
Although it didn't really have much of a flow.
It was almost like a short story instead of a poem
but it's okay because unlike other writers
yours still kept a clear message and
it was very descriptive
and it kept me on the edge
5/5
kaila

Wow I just loved the ending .. I wasn't expecting it therefore it made the poem flawless for me. The thought behind it was perfect and the emotion your put in it made it real. The words you chose were effective and overall well done. *5/5*

This poem was amazingly writen
and it was so easy for me to relate to.
i love it
good job

--jess

That was really quite interesting. I enjoyed reading it. I normally like a more structured poem, but I don't think I would have liked this poem if it was more structured or if it rhymed. I liked your use of words very much. You did a great decribing your Geography class and how it was hell. So amazing job with this poem!

Keep writing!
Cayce

Anoher unique piece. :] which makes it all the more enjoyable to read. :] this piece was deep and intense. i really like it. and i dont think i have to write words to describe how amazing i think this piece is. .just. .excellent, amazing, wonderful, too good for words. :D another 5/5. youre very talented. :]

Very nice piece. You were very descriptive and you put a lots of emotions into the piece that could be felt through the entire poem. I was locked into it from the moment I started it. great work! 5/5

New way and surprised
ur brain got alot, keep write such beautifuly
5/5

This was completely different from what I expected, which I very much liked. It reminded me of a tragic love story, with a modernised twist.

"I had thought I was free of this, I thought the paranoia and doubt had hibernated leaving my poisoned mind to mend...
I was wrong.
Peace had slipped from my grasp, the moment she walked in the class.
She wasn't suppose to be in any of his classes!"

^^ This part was brilliant. I love how it starts off making the reader feel cold, with a sense of strong sympathy for the narrator. Then moves on to a somewhat comical [probably not the best choice of words, but you get what I mean] tone.

Nice work.

Excellent story style writing