This was very beautiful Jason. You really did a great job here. There were only a few minor details that need a patching up. For example, the third stanza second line you wrote:

The best kisses I ever received in my whole life.

Instead of a single I after kisses it should have been "I've".

Also, in the first stanza second and fourth line, and the second stanza second line you don't need the use of the word "And". The "But" from the second stanza fourth line can also be removed. The reason I say this because it seems to mess up the flow. It takes away from the beauty of the poem. Other than that I think you have did a great job. Keep up the good work!

Letty