Innocence?

by MeltInHisArms   Feb 6, 2008


The wrong side of innocence, the darkest ray of light...
Screams with cold sweats in the dead of night...
A goddess he sees looking in the dept of her eyes...
Wishing she sees half of him and not the truth in those lies...
Withering flower in his hands he chooses to push aside...
Burning love in her heart he forces her to hide...

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  • 16 years ago

    by neo

    Well written. i can really relate to your words

  • 16 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    The point, rhythm, rhyme were good. it was just the flow that didnt stay. but i still get confused on what each line is saying. idk. tweak them up the best you can. then maybe i can explain what i am trying to say. and its depth...not dept.

  • 16 years ago

    by Curing the Comon Cliche

    This is amazing, u serious, u think im good wen ur writing things like this !!!! this was genious (darkest ray of light)

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