From the moment you kissed me...

by Cotton Candy Clouds   Feb 6, 2008


So i have known you for a while
we have had time to get to know each other
you can always make me smile
and i don't have my eye on another

i love the way i can be myself with you
i don't have to put on an act
to you i promise to be true
already you have had such an impact

i know you respect me
in every way i could ask for
on most things we seem to agree
everything about you i absolutely adore

i love the look in your eyes
right before you give me a kiss
your different from all the other guys
i was starting to think i wouldn't find this bliss

you proved me wrong
all guys aren't the same
with you is where i belong
im glad this isn't just another game

so hold me a bit tighter
kiss me a little longer
my worlds finally brighter
thanks to you, i can finally get stronger

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    So hold me a bit tighter
    kiss me a little longer
    my worlds finally brighter
    thanks to you, i can finally get stronger

    ^^ Such a feel-good poem Tabi!
    If only all love stories could end this way!

    Bless you,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by MissMeg

    Wow i can relate to that poem! I have this best guy friend and it's like exactly what i would like to say to him...without freaking him out. Great job hun, keep up the wonderful work.
    a real 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Another amazing poem! The words you use are put together perfectly, and it is a really enjoyable poem to read. Good Job!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    That was really sweet and sincere, straight from the heart. I loved it!
    I can totally relate,too.. Beautiful work!

    'i love the look in your eyes
    right before you give me a kiss
    your different from all the other guys
    i was starting to think i wouldn't find this bliss'
    *I specially loved this stanza, exactly the way i feel about someone.*

    Keep writing!
    Best wishes,

    TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This poem has a great rhyming flow
    =D Excellent job
    I enjoyed reading it ^^

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