This poem has a great rhyming flow
=D Excellent job
I enjoyed reading it ^^

That was really sweet and sincere, straight from the heart. I loved it!
I can totally relate,too.. Beautiful work!

'i love the look in your eyes
right before you give me a kiss
your different from all the other guys
i was starting to think i wouldn't find this bliss'
*I specially loved this stanza, exactly the way i feel about someone.*

Keep writing!
Best wishes,

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

Another amazing poem! The words you use are put together perfectly, and it is a really enjoyable poem to read. Good Job!!!!

Wow i can relate to that poem! I have this best guy friend and it's like exactly what i would like to say to him...without freaking him out. Great job hun, keep up the wonderful work.
a real 5/5!

So hold me a bit tighter
kiss me a little longer
my worlds finally brighter
thanks to you, i can finally get stronger

^^ Such a feel-good poem Tabi!
If only all love stories could end this way!

Bless you,

5/5 Ingrid