I can relate to your feelings in this poem. As much as I'd like to see a few female ex-friends of mine face death, I'll be happy if just holding a gun in my hand makes those female playas run away from me.

Ok that was definitely freaky..but very good.Amazing how you got your point across so clear by using examples that would normally be a little confusing...I have better plans for you, you heartless swine!
The flapping wings of a raven will get your attention,
When it swoops in to snatch out your pretty browns.

Thanks Maybe you had right .
this poem is excellent