Darkness returning

by kylexthexmagnificent   Feb 6, 2008


Im starting to feel it again...
the blackness poisoning my soul,
my heart is withering away,
leaving a dark black hole.

i can feel the darkness grow,
my eyes fading in the dark,
my mind going insane,
blood drips from my heart.

i cant help but feel this way,
my heart consumed by the night,
my hope is letting go,
i giving up on this fight.

darkness is who i am,
i cannot resist from bleeding,
i am the fallen angel,
reborn as a demon

pain sinking into my soul,
cold tears bleeding from my eyes,
heartache suffocating my heart,
all the hope inside, slowly dies.

i am starting to feel it again,
the blackness taking control,
my heart slowly dying,
the darkness poisoning my soul......

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  • 14 years ago

    by victoria

    Wow...i really enjoyed this poem. full of emotion. My favorite part is when you said..."i am the fallen angel,
    reborn as a demon". i really like it for some reason. very vivid. GREAT job,

    victoria

  • 14 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Darkness is who i am
    i cannot resist the bleeding
    i am the the fallen angel
    reborn as a demon
    loved this stanza great job 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    This poem is absolutely devine. Love it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    Wow this was deep. an amazing write. very powerful very expressive. it had a great flow also.

    pain sinking into my soul,
    cold tears bleeding from my eyes,
    heartache suffocating my heart,
    all the hope inside, slowly dies.

    i loved that stanza most. it was mesmerizing. i loved the emotion you expressed it really made the poem worth while. job well done. 5/5.

    -ashlei.

  • 16 years ago

    by Shanna

    Wow you really are awsome just like she said you really can write awsome poems! i love them i voted and you got 5/5 good work!!!!

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