That was good man. Real deep, with a good sense of longing. You used good, strong words, and it had a great flow. 5/5

Kamusta Jan=P..

yeah i agree, the title was sumhow appealing..and i liked what ive read..the flow was good..

Wanted girlfriend,
I'll post this to every place,
Whoever reads it can tell their friends,
Read to them the detailed description
of the girl's face...

This stanza is so intriguing, it made me think of what kinda girlfriend u lookin for and it was well described in the end...and i guess it was not really dat much to ask from a gurl so yeah goodluck..=D..

CUTE POEM A LITTLE IMPOSSIBLE TO FIND SUCH A GIRLFRIEND BUT BESIDES THAT ITS GREAT POEM I ENJOYED READING IT...=]5/5

This is truly beautiful from the beginning to the end. I like the imagery that you created, very vivid and somehow flawless. The flow of the whole piece is great, too. Evey stanza is written in a good way, with original descriptions. I like the whole piece a lot, it is filled with emotions and touching sincerity.
Keep up!
5/5 from me

Wonderful poem! i loved it, so sweet. Im sure you'll find a girl like this someday... to others she may not look like this, but to you, you will see all her perfections and bypass the imperfections. Wonderful word choice, but the flow was a little off. the poem made up for that though... you did a terrific job! keep it up! :]

This poem is soo sweet! I like the idea it is VERY unique. The message was so clear and the imagery was perfect! Cute and enjoyable. overall a great read.

Long or short but small nose,
Unbelievably cute to look at,
Pinching it will turn it as red as a rose,
Nothing is more adorable than that...

That stanza was just perfect so different even from the rest of the poem! Simply loved it!

That was very... unique. Haha. I've never read anything like this. It's good though! I liked how it was so descriptive. You could really picture what the girl looked it! Great job!

Keep writing!
Cayce

This poem is really sweet. Everybody's looking for the perfect girl for them, and in this poem it appears you know exactly what kind of girl would be perfect for you. The flow was smooth, the rhyming weren't forced and the choosing of words was nice. Great writing 5/5

BRILLANT! I absolutely adore this. The imagery in this poem was so vivid, and truly beautiful. The flow was flawless, and the emotion was intense.

"Long or short but small nose,
Unbelievably cute to look at,
Pinching it will turn it as red as a rose,
Nothing is more adorable than that..."

^ Aww. That was adorable. (: Amazing job. Overall:5.5

-- Steph.

P.S. - I hope you find the girl you're looking for. (:

That is beautifully written.
i love it
keep it up, u have talent.
5/5

This poem has a brillant flow i mean it's outta this world yeah but it's so detailed like if missed read one line it messes up the whole poem yeah your were right this poem isn't like any of the others good job! 5/5