Lingering Shadows

by MeltInHisArms   Feb 6, 2008


Lingering in the shadows of what use to be...
their eyes engrossed in passion, blinded from what's to see.
Difference of love and lust has been lost in uncertency...
laughter turned to hurt, a treasure of no treasuracy.
Expectations he holds with no desire she has to achieve...
his yearning of rightness she has yet to perceive.
Resenting change and fearing a state of insane...
impossible to match words to feelings he can't explain.

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  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Great poem....go back and check spelling, k? love it tho!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by neo

    Nice work

  • 16 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    I like whats behend the poem, the flow, and the words spelled correctly. =]

    uncertency-??sp??
    treasuracy-??sp??
    insane-insanity

    i think this deserves a 4.8, but i cant give u decimals...so ill give it a 5.

    -kitty

  • 16 years ago

    by Curing the Comon Cliche

    Impossible to match words to feelings he can't explain. holy god, that was the most amazing line ever, 99/5

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