This is a very good poem. And you sound VERY strong in the message you're delivering in the poem. If I was just a person who read your writing for the first time ever, I'd think you're a real and serious woman after reading this strong poem. And we need more real women like yourself in this world!

You do a good job of keeping it real even in your poems! I'll be looking forward to reading your future poems, whether they're sad poems or positive poems.

WOW, it's like you peeked into my life and read my thoughts or something. This is exactly what I'm having to do in my own life right now. And this part...
Today I take the first step to a better life.
It's the day of my journey into my new world,
My own land and the beginning of my piece of mind.
Well, I'm starting school soon to start career training and that verse just made me think of that, perfectly. You did a wonderful job on the poem and I know, as a reader, I could really relate to it. 5/5 because it's so perfect in my eyes.

Yep.. good one.. its really inspiring me...

thx a lot