by LoveBird99 Feb 6, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Look into your eyes and tell me what you see |
by Marc Ortiz
Aww what a tragic ending :| I have a suggestion in the title try changing the title or just remove the 'suicide' part so that when a reader reads this poem he/she won't expect the ending. |
Omg this is amazing!!!!!!!! i love it so much. definitly a 5, and going in my faves. u put so much emotion into this in such a beautiful way. |
by Benito
This is good..but i think it would be alot better if you seperated each line..and made it into two. still good though.5/5 |