Nice! short and passionately written.. every stanza has a detailed description of what happend or wat you feel at that moment...
my fav stanza is:
"A picture perfect sight
A simple nod and wink
Then the image disintagrates
I'm feeling my heart begin to sink"

great poem! =]

Wow... i really love this piece, the flow is flawless, and the emotions is so real it gave me goose bumps. this is so sad, but so so real... very very good... 5/5

I think that this was your best poem yet. I really liked it, it was very sincere and raw. Awesome job! keep writing! 5/5