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I have to disagree.
The poem is great.
Flawless, actually.
But, if you leave and we don't then we have to have closure, which mean's saying goodbye.

And, you'll be remembered as mr. amazing, of course. xD
Seriously, you will. :]

This is so beautiful...It's also very touching. Everything about this poem is just perfect to me. I am giving my honest critique here. You used wonderful imagery. The flow was flawless and it rhymed perfectly. I love this poem. I could actually picture it in my mind. You have a wonderful talent. I am sorry that it took me so long to read some of your work. Keep up the great writing. You're awesome!

Letty

This poem speaks the truth. I love how it flowed so nicely. Keep up the good work.

Erin

Wow.. i am so amazed!
that was a beautiful poem, i really liked it!
i am going to add it to my favorites(: