Awe this was so cute and so sad at the same time. I loved it.

Another good poem, full of emotion and feelings, 5/5

Lol that cute<3

Awh. =/ This is sad. When I looked at the title I was likd "Oh God, I hate clowns.." But this poem was nothing I expected. Lots of emotions writtin in your words. 5/5 =)

Sweet and sad. why does she mock u. i thought it would be a scary poem, cuz clowns r scary, but i liked it. <3

Your right, no one is perfect but it just seems you are very close...anyway....yeah, I wrote something for you....I'll send it tomorrow...it's korny but hey, so am I....xoxoxo

One powerful poem. And a great title for the for this wonderful piece 5/5.

Great poem
keep it up
xx

Wait?! u wrote something for who?!

Awwwww....this was such a nice poem...i felt the sadness behind the words....an excellent write and the flow just fit right....dun worry things happen for a reason...i know its easy to say but face and deal wit it..eventually u'll gunna be ok and it will make u stronger...=D...when there is sadness there will be happiness..jus wait and see.....besides its nice to have pains sumtimes coz then u will kno what happiness is....goodluck...and tnx for the comments..5/5

Your poem's are great,
Heh, I envy you.
:P

Mike, the more times i read your poems, the more in love with them i fall. really. don't stop bein you (remember what we talked about!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)

butterfly kisses and bear hugz

Wow simply amazing jus like you loved the poem hun
5/5
Fantastic job!!!!

This poem is soooo cute and sweet! i give ya a 5/5!! =p

"I saw you there
I couldn't help but stare
The twinkle in your eye
The moonlit in the sky"

Great rhyme scheme I like it. Its simple but its always nice to read.

"I dare not say a word
Nor approach you if I am heard"

I know how this feels, to me it sounds like your hiding emotion from this one person and I know how it feels to do that.

"that I am but a show
A show for you to laugh at
To make a mock
With that I take stock"

To me this is saying that you are trying your best to impress someone and do everything you can to do so even if it hurts. You just want that attention for a short while and you have it and your happy even if it hurts. to me that is the hidden meaning in this, but thats just me lol.

"But i did make you smile
It was worth all the while........ "

Great ending I liked it. It was beautifully ended. I liked this poem. It was short but I liked it a lot of emotion again was put in to this poem.

That waz good

Full of emotions, feelings and sadness. 5/5 good job, Em x