Wow. very very beautiful, emotional, bitter. i loved it. keep writing and smile!

OMG I LOVE THIS POEM!!!! I KNWO HOW YOU FEEL!!! I CAN UNDERSTAND WHAT YOU SAID!!!

OMG I LOVE THIS POEM!!!! I KNWO HOW YOU FEEL!!! I CAN UNDERSTAND WHAT YOU SAID!!!

I guess hollow points are out of the question here!!! The blood of a poets broken heart shows up well on the white page with words that show the cracks and depths of that wounded heart. Keep up the good works.

I loved the emotion in this.
i understand your pain

Ughh. went through the same thing like a month ago.

i loved it. adding it to favorites :]

I loved this poem its going to go in my favorites. i can really relate and i think a lot of other girls (and guys) can too. good job!