by Kayla
I thought this was a very beautiful poem. It was short, sweet, sad, and simple. You did a great job capturing the emotions in this piece. The only thing I have to suggest is making your poem more professional looking. For example: |
by Tom Swart
The blood of a poets broken heart shows up well on the white page with words that show the cracks and depths of that wounded heart. Keep up the good works. |
by Kristen
I love it, |
by Em
Hard to love someone that just can't love you back. I know how it feels. Well portrayed, 5/5. Em |