Hey every1. I like to play bass guitar, swing dance, and do sign language, and write poetry. This site is really fun, cuz alot of the people r my age so i can see how my age group likes the stuff i write. I used to think that poetry was just like writing, and I didn't take it very seriously, but I guess i sort of understemated it, cuz poetry can be really powerful. I mean, yeah sometimes, I just think of some good words that go together and say it's a poem, but really poetry comes from the heart. I admit, i think it's kind of weird when poets are in their own little world and are super Emo-tional, but sometimes it feels like poetry is the only way that i can express how i really feel. PLEASE comment on my stuff and I'd be happy to comment on urs, rating is great too. thanx SOOO much! ~Amy~ |
I felt the decay
Like a fruit left too long on the tree...
White-knuckled hands gripping forsaken dreams
Restrict both heart and mind of being free...
Reach out and touch your dreams
Hold them close and don't release...
Everywhere you gaze
There are people who have heard...
A stream of tears, heavy breaths and swolen eyes
Until the constant grieving makes you numb...
Pretend that smile are heart beats. Try to stay alive!!! |