I'm just a chick trying to improve my writing and pass the time. I figure this would be the perfect spot to get the opinions of other aspiring writers, and those with the skills to keep me on my toes. So if you have comments on my work please feel free to express them. All criticism is welcomed. |
I sit in the wooden swing on my porch
As if you were reading my mind...
When the roses are not red
and the violets are not blue...
I greeted him with a smile
he winced, then he frowned...
For the first time it has become apparently clear
That everything I want in life is everything I...
Unrequited love and unfulfilled dreams
desolation ensued...
To love a man
who's love can't be returned...
For the first time it has become apparently clear
That everything I want in life is everything I...
I greeted him with a smile
he winced, then he frowned...
When the roses are not red
and the violets are not blue...
Love is the purest form of evil. For the love of any person, place, or thing, will lead you astray. |
A heart that has not been taught to love will spread hate throughout the body, and when the skin is cut, it will bleed a trail of evil and destruction for others to follow. |
To hate you, |