Please comment my poem " F U TAI "

Can someone please comment my new poem..? " I HATE GUYS "

IF l0viNg y0u iS wr0nG thEn i d0nt wAnt t0 bE riGhT...

i l0ve y0u AG

[love]is like a butterfly
if you hold it too tight it'll die
but if you let it too lose it'll fly away

Love leaves a memory that no one
can steal. but it also leaves a heartache
that no one can heal

If you don't like me, there`s nothing i can do.
here`s a newsflash sweetie: i don't live to
please you.

Love is like quicksand, the deeper you fall in,
the harder it is to get out.

To the world, you may be one person.
To one person, you may be the world.

He gave her 12 roses 11 real and 1 fake and said,
* I will love you until the last one dies *

Wrote your name in the sand, but the waves washed it away. I wrote your name on my hand but it washed away the next day. I wrote your name on a piece of paper but I accidenatally threw it away. I wrote your name in my heart and forever it will stay!