Okay, well here is my life....lol j/k. Well, I write pretty often, but I get advice from friends before putting them on here. So only my best ones (or my friends' best ones) get put on here, and I would really like critism. I'm trying to get better, and all my poems are about things that have actually happened to me, so please don't say that I "stole" it from someone else. The few poems on my page that aren't by me, are by my friends, and I don't appreciate people saying those are "stolen" either. Critism is nice, but if you just plain HATE my writing, well don't read any more of my poems, don't go through them and leave a comment on each of them saying how much you hate them. |
*My best friend wrote this about her dad.*
You don't know how i feel inside...
Stupid little brats!
God I even like cats...
Ever have that feeling
That something ain't right...
You sit there and smile at me
Behind his back, so he won't see...
Last things I remember about you
Was hearing the words "sissy, what do I...
This world is full of smiles and tears
Its full of dreams and fears...
A wise man once told me
That there was more fish in the sea...
I love you
But I love him too...
I made myself swear to forget you
But every time I saw you, I forgot to...
You ruined my life
So I said goodbye...
Cry me a boat and build a river to get over it! |
You and your friends go out looking all goody-goody, while me and my friends go out looking good in jeans and a hoodie! |
I lost 10 pounds, but don't worry, I found it again. |