there isnt much to say about me other then i love writing poems i have a few of mine on here. i love horses and my boyfriend. i lovve karate(so much i have been in it for ten years which i just got back recently from the dominican republic world congress trournament(wow thats a long name) i suck but i still had fun please comment on my poems be harsh the do need work so if you feel you need to rip them apart email it to me thank you and may God bless you. |
Not my real first but the other is on a diff comp...
All of us cry...
Hey please give me feed back comments i need help
Nothing breaks the chain...
Please give me comments i need help on my poems
My hands were tied...
Please any comments are welcomed with open arms
I wear black...
The tender cry I hear
Is music to my ear...
The stars shone like diamonds
A soft pulse broke the silence...
Well i am not sure where this goes so i put it in...
hopelessly lost without feeling...
The pain, the tears
the deeds end nears...
With a bullet in the shoulder
you thought my life was over...
Always hiding
For I am to shy...
Think for a minute....was thinking really that hard? no?? then why not think before you attempt to rip me apart? |
If life were simple then what would its point be? |