Please any comments are welcomed with open arms
I wear black...

The thought of you leaving
and not being there...

The tender cry I hear
Is music to my ear...

Please give me comments i need help on my poems
My hands were tied...

The pain, the tear
The deeds, end near...

Why must I live here with him
He doesn't say nice try or anything...

Hey please give me feed back comments i need help
Nothing breaks the chain...

Well this is dedicated to my baby Gimli he is my...
I have a horse...

The stars shone like diamonds
A soft pulse broke the silence...

Not my real first but the other is on a diff comp...
All of us cry...

The pain, the tears
the deeds end nears...

Always hiding
For I am to shy...