Not my real first but the other is on a diff comp...
All of us cry...

Hey please give me feed back comments i need help
Nothing breaks the chain...

Please give me comments i need help on my poems
My hands were tied...

Please any comments are welcomed with open arms
I wear black...

The tender cry I hear
Is music to my ear...

The thought of you leaving
and not being there...

With a bullet in the shoulder
you thought my life was over...

The pain, the tears
the deeds end nears...

The stars shone like diamonds
A soft pulse broke the silence...