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I get the call...
I know it's not good news...
I've always been terrified to love,
Because to love meant to hurt...
Glimpsing the sight of my beautiful friend,
I can't help but miss your piercing touch...
My heart was a gift to you.
Took five weeks to open it...
My heart was a gift to you.
Took five weeks to open it...
Glimpsing the sight of my beautiful friend,
I can't help but miss your piercing touch...
You told me you loved me.
You told me you cared...
Why do you have to be so confusing?
I lie awake wondering if you care or if your just...
It's over in my mind.
Eyelids closing over my tears...
I have few things I live for. They are like blood in my veins. Both of them slip away in harmony. |