PLease comment on my poems, i will really apreciate it |
I've had this feeling for what seems like eternity
it's weighing down my heart, like a heavy burden...
You are my angel
who lifts me to my feet...
A rose once bloomed
Deep red in hue...
The very first time i saw you,
i took in every detail of your perfect face...
Up above in the sky,
all the good things i remember her by...
If your ship doesnt come in...swim out to it |
Never be afraid to do something in one leap if asked, one cant cross a chasm in two small jumps |
Never be afraid of doing something if you wouldnt be afraid to do it should it be the last hour of your life |