Sorry for doing this cause i know you guys dont like it but can you guys please comment on some of my poems..i would appreciate it so much and ill definately return the favor!thanks

Sorry for doing this cause i know you guys dont like it but can you guys please comment on some of my poems..i would appreciate it so much and ill definately return the favor!thanks

I didn't want to admit it, it was easier to lie,
and hide the hurt and emptiness; to smile
instead of cry

Do you ever feel like...
If you were prettier...
Life would be easier?

I've been trying so hard just to keep away
& now look where I’m standing.
Trying so hard to walk away but
its impossible to watch you fade away.

I just wanna kiss him and tell him that through all
of this I ended up doing the one thing I told myself not to;
I fell.. hard... and now I've crashed

&& Lately youre all I think about

I can't let go. Not now, not after all we've been through.

& I'd rather not sleep than risk having a dream about you.

I know I made too many bad mistakes
And I know I let you down so much
I know I don't deserve someone like you
But without you I cant make it through
Just look into my eyes and you will see,
How much I really want us to be.x3