Still a beginner... Would love comments and votes...
We want to improve our lives...

Ok everyone, I'm still new to all of this poetry...
Its a thought we can't control...

I know that you are still young,
So you might not be able to see...

Please comment or vote, I'm still beginner, and...
You told me you'd forgiven me...

I was walking down a distant path,
On a frigid October day...

Every time I think of this,
A feeling overcomes me...

One of my more recent poems... Please take a few...
This world is full of hatred...

I'm walking down this road,
Where happiness does not exist...

Hey everyone... Well here is another one... Still...
I'm the person you walk by...