I've been writing poetry for only a few years, so please let me know what you think(be honest)...I want to learn how I can improve my poetry so please email me with any ideas |
Love is worthless when you try to hard
you need to be patient and kind...
I try and hide the pain
that is hidden within...
Everyone hates her
She’s a burden to them all...
All she saw was black and blue spots
As his fist came hurtling towards her...
I sit in class and watch you
As you talk to your friends...
Everytime I fall in love, there's never anyone their to catch me |
You can make someone like you, but you can't make someone love you |
Just because you can't get him out of your head, doesn't mean you can't get him out of your heart. |