please comment on my poems;; it means a lot. |
Never did she cry for you
Not once did she say she cared...
I want to dance with you for a life time
Hold you close to my heart...
He was in that girl dreams
A lighted silolit upon him beams...
Finding myself;
you want a girl just like her...
Your love is like a poison it's fumes intoxicate...
making me no longer a whole...
Write me a song baby dear,
would the lyrcis be filled with love or fear...
Seeing her touch you
makes me die incide...
Things with us won't be the same
we were playing a game...
Get carried away with me
Open your eyes and see...
I'd rather frown and mean it then fake a smile. |
When the ocean doesnt touch the sand..i'll forever be your fan * |
Kalan's Hair smells like Sunshine =) |