Feel free to comment and critique my poems. I would greatly appreciate the feedback to further improve my poems in the future. Its also nice to hear what people think, and how I put all my emotions into words. Life gets hard sometimes, but for people who enjoy writting or reading poetry... its just nice to sit down and read what people say about them alot, for me...it makes my day! :) |
When I saw you,
There was that little something about you...
It's not as long as it looks, Please read!
I went to see a preacher...
**It's not as long as it looks, Please Please...
I went to see a preacher...
* I am his daughter, Chantelle, and the other day...
It's not as long as it looks, Please read...
When I saw you,
There was that little something about you...
All these years
All this depression...
I never thought i'd turn into the ones that hurt me |
That night you were holding me in your arms made me not to want to ever go to sleep, because then tomarrow wud come, the day you would have to leave. :* ( |