Daddys little defect

Little child so innocent,
little child so young,
little child so pure,
from my poem little child....

Hey everyone,
can yew please comment on my poem
little child its about child abuse and it
really would mean alot to me

*Please can anyone comment on my poem ' i just need to forget you' it really would mean the world to me and i will comment back on one of your poems too thank you

After every lie i ever told you..
Dont you think i deserve someone new..
After the times i cried...
After everytime i found out you lied..
When i hurts i smile..
and think about you in a my heart all the while..

If its Not Happiness Inside Me Then Just What Is It??

I Hide Behind My Broken Smile....
Just To Think I Was Thinking Of You All The While

*^please comment And will return the favour^*