Hey i'm zoe i'm 15 and from colorado...writing is something that relieves stress. i haven't written in a while cuz nothing is turning out the way i need it to so i just give up. if you could give me some feedback on my latest stuff i think that would help me a lot...thanks |
Desperate for your touch
Longing for you to be near...
You're the star
In my night sky...
Have you ever wanted
To live someone else's life...
You see a small girl
Sobbing silently...
His clothes were ripped
His body had bruises...
She keeps her journal
Locked up tight...
For all sad words
Of tongue and pen...
You know its funny
How we live just to die...
I got in the car
To hang out ike friends...
It got so hard
For she wasn't strong...
Sometimes in life you're forced to look yourself in the mirror and face the person who has taken rejection, harsh words, criticsm, and has been pushed down time and time again to find the strength to say "ya know what? I deserve better." |
Be with who makes you happy even if it means you're always running back. Sometimes in life when you get what you want you end up missing what you left behind |
But it's not so bad....you're only the best i ever had |