I see said the blind man to his deaf wife

Hey do you think you could look at my poem "I Want" its my fisrt poem and i would just like to know how i did and what you think of it...It would mean alot me me

Thanks

**Take my breath away**

**One day you will walk up to me and say "whats more important me or your live" and i will say my life and you will walk away never knowing that you are my life**

Not mine but i like it

**If you can't get someone out of your head, maybe their meant to be there**

**Change can hurt**

**Why can't I breathe when ever i think about you, Why can't I speak when ever i talk about you**

**Sticks and stones may break her bones, but names could make her starve herself to death**

**Blonde Because someone has to live up to the jokes**

Life is short
Kiss slowly
Laugh Insanely
Love truly
and forgive Quickly