hey everybody, im emily! i was just recently introduced to poetry in my previous school year. Ever since then i have been trying to improve my writting skills. Poetry has become my new hobby, so please help me out, i would love some opinions! Thanks and i hope you enjoy my poems. |
The words are so jumbled
The message is unclear...
Tonight i slowly felt myself slip away
as you told me that there was another girl on your...
Sitting here alone
thinking of the choices i have made...
Standing without her
in the pouring rain...
My life went up in whirl winds
the day you said it was over...
Which is better? a lie that draws a smile or the truth that draws a tear? |
Which is better? trying for what you want, even if you dont get it, or not trying and never knowing if you could have succeeded? |
There is nothing in the world that cannot be if you believe... |